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17．根據(jù)要求完成寫作
很多城市都正在創(chuàng)建文明城市． 文明城市的創(chuàng)建需要靠每個(gè)人的努力． 你在公共場所有沒有看見一些不文明的行為呢？請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書，內(nèi)容包括：
1．列舉你在公共場所經(jīng)常見到的兩個(gè)不文明的行為．
2．提出文明準(zhǔn)則，至少兩條．
3．號(hào)召大家做一個(gè)文明的人．
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名．
2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右． 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Citizens，
As we all know，our city is aiming at being a civilized one．Everybody should make an effort．                         Thank you all．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勆钪兴姷牟晃拿餍袨椋⑻?hào)召大家做一個(gè)文明人．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．列舉你在公共場所經(jīng)常見到的兩個(gè)不文明的行為．
2．提出文明準(zhǔn)則，至少兩條．
3．號(hào)召大家做一個(gè)文明的人．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
in public 公共場所
cut in line 插隊(duì)
be bad for 對(duì)…不利
obey the rules 遵守規(guī)則
what's more 再者
try one's best 竭盡全力
【高分句型】
1．①To make our city a better one，I think ②we should always ③obey the rules④such as waiting in line ⑤while shopping and keep our mobile phones off⑥during the meeting．
①動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．
②省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
③obey the rules 遵守規(guī)則
④such as 例如
⑤while shopping省略句，完整表達(dá)while we are shopping．
⑥during 在…期間．
2．①Let's②try our best and be a polite person，③no matter where we are．
①let sb do sth 讓某人做某事
②try one's best 竭盡全力
③no matter where 不論哪里，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句．

解答 Dear Citizens，
     As we all know，our city is aiming at being a civilized one．Everybody should make an effort．．
 However，some people still behave badly in public．For example，some people cut in line while getting on buses or getting into cinemas．Besides，some men often smoke in non-smoking areas in public．（兩個(gè)不文明的行為） It's really bad for other people's health．To make our city a better one，I think we should always obey the rules such as waiting in line while shopping and keep our mobile phones off during the meeting．【高分句型】What's more，we should never litter in public．（文明準(zhǔn)則）
Let's try our best and be a polite person，no matter where we are【高分句型】．（號(hào)召）
Thank you all．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．