Question

我國(guó)有很多瀕危動(dòng)物，請(qǐng)你談?wù)勎覈?guó)是如何保護(hù)它們的，我們應(yīng)該怎么做？

Answer 1

The first problem is to know why we need to protect animals. Some are in danger because they don’t have enough food. For example, the panda mainly eats bamboo. The Chinese government’s plan is to provide more nature reserves for the panda. For other animals, such as tigers and whales, the difficulty is to stop people killing them. Another important thing is to keep the Earth clean. We must not pollute rivers or cut down forests. We all need clean air and clean water.

解析試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題，本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),復(fù)數(shù)第一人稱(chēng),注意情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外，在描述時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意人稱(chēng)的變化。
考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。