Question

19．以 Pocket money is______ for young children為題寫篇小短文，詞數80-100．步驟與要點如下：
1．確定主題，并在文中說明原因；
2．圍繞主題，進行敘述；
3．講述一段與主題有關的故事或經歷．
要求：
1．補全標題；
2．字跡工整，內容完整連貫，語言準確規(guī)范；
3．鼓勵寫出真情實感，對緊扣主題的適當發(fā)揮不予扣分；
4．作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子；
5．作文中不要出現考生的真實校名和姓名．
Pocketmoneyis expected to be cautious foryoungchildren
Nowadays，middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money，which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools．
Generally，parents give their children some money every month as their living expenses．However，some students spend less on regular meals and everyday goods to save their pocket money with which they buy snacks，MP4 players，fashionable clothes and so on．What's worse，they spend it on playing computer games or surfing the Internet．Therefore，they don't know how hard it is to earn money．
In order to help the students，we should call on parents monitoring the pocket money．The school should take proper measures to educate the students and make them build up the good value of consuming．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Nowadays，middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money，which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools現在，中學生用零花錢往往大手大腳，這已經成為學校面臨的一個難題．這是由which引導的一個非限定性的定語從句，修飾前面的整個句子．
高分句型二：What's worse，they spend it on playing computer games or surfing the Internet更糟糕的是，他們把錢花在玩電腦游戲或上網上；What's worse更糟糕的是；sb．spend some time （in）on（doing） sth．某人花費時間做某事．

解答 Pocket money is expected to be cautious for young children
      Nowadays，middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money，which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools．（高分句型一）（學生花零用錢存在的問題）
      Generally，parents give their children some money every month as their living expenses．However，some students spend less on regular meals and everyday goods to save their pocket money with which they buy snacks，MP4 players，fashionable clothes and so on．What's worse，they spend it on playing computer games or surfing the Internet．（高分句型二）Therefore，they don't know how hard it is to earn money．（描述學生花零用錢的不良現象）
      In order to help the students，we should call on parents monitoring the pocket money．The school should take proper measures to educate the students and make them build up the good value of consuming．（呼吁家長的監(jiān)督和采取的措施）

點評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句．（3）進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句．（4）適當使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．