Question

Ann 和Anna 一樣高，Anna比Ann外向，但是Ann的成績(jī)比Anna好。

Ann 和Anna都很健康，因?yàn)樗齻兠刻於煎憻�，一星期要吃四至五次的蔬菜，而且從不吃垃圾食品�?/span>

上個(gè)周六，她們和同學(xué)們一起騎車去人民公園（the People’s Park）玩了，上午做游戲，下午拍很多照，玩得很開(kāi)心。

Ann and Anna are my classmates. They are twin sisters.

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Answer 1

Ann and Anna are my classmates. They are twin sisters。Anna is more outgoing that Ann while Ann is better at learning than Anna. They both are healthy because they take exercises every day. They eat vegetable five times a week and never eat junk food. They lead a healthy life.

Last week ,they with his classmates went to the People’s Park.. They played a game in the morning while they took photos ,which make them happy. They had a good time.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是人物介紹，給出一定的漢語(yǔ)提示。給考生發(fā)揮的余地 較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇句式要賦予變化，這樣才能證明你能更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)整體。最后要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯與高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。因?yàn)槭侨宋锝榻B，故時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)較好，注意人稱的轉(zhuǎn)換并且注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文提到很多不錯(cuò)的短語(yǔ)如 be good at 擅長(zhǎng)做某事，lead a ..life 過(guò)著。。。生活，take photos 照相。Anna is more outgoing that Ann while Ann is better at learning than Anna這句話中while表對(duì)比，使這句話形成鮮明前后對(duì)比。They eat vegetable five times a week and never eat junk food.這句話中and連接兩個(gè)并且的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。They played a game in the morning while they took photos ,which make them happy這句話中出現(xiàn)which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文。