Question

10．A．Say thanks to
B．My dream
要求：1．請從所給的A、B兩個題目中任選一個作答，分值相同．
如選A題，請把題目補充完整再作答，例如，你可以寫"Say thanks to my mom"，"Say thanks to my teacher"等．
2．注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范．
3．不得使用真實姓名和校名，如需使用名字，請用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名統(tǒng)一用Guangming Middle School．
4．詞數(shù)不少于80詞．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I still remember the day①when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates②because I was shy and③afraid to be laughed at．我仍然記得我英語分數(shù)低的那天，我將自己藏起來因為我害羞害怕被嘲笑．
①when作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的the day．
②because引導的原因狀語從句．
③be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事．
【高分句型二】
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．她是一名老師，像春天一樣，鼓勵我?guī)ьI(lǐng)我走向美好的未來．
who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的teacher

解答 Say thanks to my teacher
I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!（感謝誰）
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．（形象）I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day  when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．【高分句型一】Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．（如何幫助我的，為什么要感謝）
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future【高分句型二】．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．（感受和如何表示謝意）

點評 考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)．要求介紹．同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．