Question

你叫Suzy，你參加了“小寵物主人俱樂(lè)部”，你將要做一個(gè)演講，談?wù)勀愫湍愕膶櫸�，你的演講將包含以下內(nèi)容：

1．自我介紹：Andy，14歲，來(lái)自常熟；

2．我家里養(yǎng)了一只貓，懶，喜歡睡在沙發(fā)上；還有一只鸚鵡，會(huì)重復(fù)我說(shuō)話，我喜歡教它說(shuō)英語(yǔ)；

3．結(jié)束語(yǔ)：我認(rèn)為寵物……（至少兩句）

(70詞左右，不包含開頭和結(jié)尾，不要逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。)

Dear friends,

I'd like to share my experience of keeping pets with you. First let me introduce myself.

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That's all, thank you.

 

Answer 1

Dear friends,

I’d like to share my experience of keeping pets with you. First let me introduce myself.

My name is Andy and I am 14 years old. I am from Changshu. It’s a beautiful city in Jiangsu. I have a cat at home, but it is a lazy cat. It likes sleeping on the sofa. I also have a pet. It is a carrot. It likes to repeat my words, so I often teach it how to speak English. I think it is necessary to have a pet at home. It can bring me a lot of happiness.

That’s all, thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單，寫作難度不大，是一篇描寫寵物的作文，而且有三條提示語(yǔ)：1．自我介紹：Andy，14歲，來(lái)自常熟；2．我家里養(yǎng)了一只貓，懶，喜歡睡在沙發(fā)上；還有一只鸚鵡，會(huì)重復(fù)我說(shuō)話，我喜歡教它說(shuō)英語(yǔ)；3．結(jié)束語(yǔ)：我認(rèn)為寵物……（至少兩句）。寫作時(shí)要緊緊圍繞提示語(yǔ)內(nèi)容，并且有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇作文寫得不錯(cuò)，緊緊圍繞提示語(yǔ)內(nèi)容，并且有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮展開的寫作。而且在作文中運(yùn)用了不少好的詞匯，share sth. with sb.，be from , like doing sth., It is necessary to do sth. ,a lot of等等，為作文增添了色彩。

考點(diǎn)：提示性作文。