Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分20分）

假設(shè)你是Anna， 請代表全班同學(xué)給校長寫一封推薦Daniel為本學(xué)期最佳學(xué)生獎的推薦信。

能力	聰明，各門功課優(yōu)秀，擅長英語，有空時經(jīng)常在英語俱樂部幫忙
個性	才思敏捷，計(jì)劃周密，善良，樂于助人
事跡	經(jīng)常參加一些為貧困兒童募集衣服，書本的活動；幫助同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)英語；上周，一個5歲男孩迷路，他幫助孩子找到家；上周末，他從大火里救出了一個老人

要求：1. 詞數(shù)70左右。 2. 不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I would like to tell you about my favorit classmate Daniel, who I believe should receive the Best Student Award of the year.Daniel is an excellent student. She got good grades in all the courses. She is good at English ,she often offers help at the English club.She is smart and thoughtful. She is also friendly and considerate, always thinking of others first. She Often gives away her clothes and books to the poor children .She also helps the students to learn English; Last week, a 5-year-old boy lost, he helped him find his home

Last weekend when she was on her way home, she rescued an old man from the fire, and took care of him until his family arrived..

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如I would like to tell you about my favorit classmate Daniel, who I believe should receive the Best Student Award of the year. She is also friendly and considerate, always thinking of others first.等，also等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文