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17．根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫(xiě)一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)．所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用．請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名．
假如你叫李濤，最近和美國(guó)朋友Peter通過(guò)電子郵件談?wù)摳髯試?guó)家的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日．請(qǐng)根據(jù)他的問(wèn)題回復(fù)郵件．
提示詞語(yǔ)：Spring Festival，new clothes，lucky money，clean，get together
What's your favourite festival？
Why do you like this festival？
How do you celebrate it？

To       Peter
From    Li Tao
Subject  My favourite festival
Hi!Peter，
    I'm glad to hear from you．My favourite festival is Spring Festival．It usually comes in January or in February．It's the most important festival of the year and it is a time when all the family gets together．
I like Spring Festival because I have lots of free time at this time of the year．I can decorate the house with beutiful lights and flowers with my mother．I can always get red packet with money so that I can buy whatever I want．What's more，My parents often take me to watch dragon and lion dacing．It's quite a bit fun．
We often celebrate Spring Festival by having a big dinner visiting relatives and friends getting some red packets and letting off fireworks．We often have a big dinner from the first day of Spring Festival to the last day．We often go to our relatives'home and have a big dinner and also we have a big dinner at home．We often have many things to talk and we are very happy．After dinner we watch the TV programs of CCTV．At midnight we don't go to bed but wait for the new day．We always let off fireworks．It's very exciting and interesting!
Yours，
Li Tao．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給朋友寫(xiě)郵件說(shuō)說(shuō)最喜歡的節(jié)日．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1最喜歡什么節(jié)日？
2為什么喜歡？
3怎樣慶祝？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
decorate …with …用…裝飾…
what's more再者
wait for  等待…
let off引爆
【高分句型】
1．I can always get red packet with money ①so that I can buy ②whatever I want．
①so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．
②whatever I want為賓語(yǔ)從句，作為buy的賓語(yǔ)．
2．At midnight we don't go to bed but wait for the new day．
not…but…不是…而是…

解答 To       Peter
From    Li Tao
Subject  My favourite festival
Hi!Peter，
    I'm glad to hear from you．My favourite festival is Spring Festival．（最喜歡什么節(jié)日）It usually comes in January or in February．It's the most important festival of the year and it is a time when all the family gets together．
I like Spring Festival because I have lots of free time at this time of the year．I can decorate the house with beutiful lights and flowers with my mother．I can always get red packet with money so that I can buy whatever I want．【高分句型】What's more，My parents often take me to watch dragon and lion dacing．It's quite a bit fun．（為什么喜歡）
We often celebrate Spring Festival by having a big dinner visiting relatives and friends getting some red packets．We often have a big dinner from the first day of Spring Festival to the last day．We often go to our relatives'home and have a big dinner and also we have a big dinner at home．We often have many things to talk and we are very happy．After dinner we watch the TV programs of CCTV．At midnight we don't go to bed but wait for the new day．【高分句型】We always let off fireworks．It's very exciting and interesting!（怎樣慶祝？）
Yours，
Yours
Li Tao

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無(wú)把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．