Question

【題目】隨著手機的普及，越來越多的人癡迷于手機，紛紛加入低頭族。請你參考下圖反映的現(xiàn)象及內(nèi)容提示，圍繞“拒為低頭族”（stop phubbing），用英語寫一篇80詞左右短文。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

內(nèi)容提示：

1.我身邊也有很多低頭族，非常喜歡玩手機。

2.他們不停用手機發(fā)信息、上網(wǎng)、玩游戲或拍照。

3.影響學習和生活。上課或工作時間玩手機極大浪費時間。

4.引發(fā)健康問題，長時間玩手機引發(fā)眼、背、頸痛。

Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. ________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them.

There is a lot of phubbing around me. They like playing with mobile phones very much. They can’t stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.

However, phubbing influences /affects not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, especially in class or at work, is a big waste of time. What’s more, it can lead to health problems. For example, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.

In my opinion, it is time for us to throw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. When we use phones properly we can live a happy life.

【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀寫作提示并認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。在檢查環(huán)節(jié)，考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。