Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是《達(dá)州晚報(bào)》的小記者，星期六和同學(xué)去參加了“文明小市民”的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的信息，把當(dāng)天的活動(dòng)寫(xiě)成日記發(fā)表在晚報(bào)上，倡導(dǎo)更多的同學(xué)和市民來(lái)關(guān)心環(huán)境綜合治理。

要求：1．日記內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上提示的所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2．書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，句式規(guī)范，條理清楚。

3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和地名。

4．日記的格式和開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

提示詞語(yǔ)：at the school gate(在校門(mén)口)

Saturday，March 14th

I took part in the“Civilized Citizen”activity with my classmates today．

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Answer 1

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One possible version： 　　Saturday, March14th 　　I took part in the“Civilized Citizen”activity with my classmates today．We got together at the school gate at 8∶30a.m．a(chǎn)nd left for the People’s Park．On the way to the park, we found some people break the traffic rules．For example, two men went across the street when the traffic lights were red．In the park, people were having fun．But a few children were climbing the trees or drawing pictures on the walls．Many people were talking loudly in public．And on the ground, too much litter had been thrown here and there． 　　To change this situation, we began to pick up the litter and throw it into the dustbin, clean the walls, and plant trees．And then we told the children that climbing trees is dangerous and bad for the trees．Also, we said politely to some people,“Would you mind keeping your voice down and enjoy the quiet of the park?”After hearing our words, those people all realized their mistakes and corrected them immediately．At that moment, we felt excited and proud． 　　Environment is rather important to all of us．Though our today’s activity can’t totally solve the problem of the environment, I believe we can make people understand that even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．Let’s work together to make the world a better place to live in! 　　一、評(píng)分原則 　　1．本題總分為10分，按四個(gè)檔次給分，至少包含以下要點(diǎn)：集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)、發(fā)現(xiàn)的不良現(xiàn)象、采取的措施、活動(dòng)的意義和感受。評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 　　2．文中若出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名，酌情扣分。 　　二、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 　　三、說(shuō)明 　　對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。相同的錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)計(jì)算。