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18．臨近畢業(yè)之際．你們班要準(zhǔn)備一場(chǎng)畢業(yè)生晚會(huì)（Prom Night）．假設(shè)你將在晚會(huì)上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下提示，以"My Speech for Prom Night"為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿．

要求：（1）語(yǔ)言通頎，耍點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貧．條理洧楚，書寫規(guī)范；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校的名稱：
（3）詞數(shù)：80〜100同．
My Speech for Prom Night
Dear teachers and classmates，
Good evening!I'm very proud to share something with you all．
First，I'd like to thank all our teachers．We have learned a lot from you．You've developed our interests，skills and made us grow up happily．
Next，I should thank my classmates．We've studied together，helped each other and had a lot of fun．Soon we will go to new schools and may not see each other so often in the future．But I believe our friendship will never change．
Wish you all success and good luck in the future．
That's all．Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是以"My Speech for Prom Night"為題根據(jù)圖示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．發(fā)言時(shí)的感受
2．你想要感謝誰(shuí)？
3．為什么要感謝他們？
4．祝愿
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be proud to do sth 做某事很驕傲
share sth with sb 與某人分享某物
make sb do sth 讓某人做某事

【高分句型】
1．①I'm very proud to ②share something with you all．
①be proud to do sth 做某事很驕傲
②share sth with sb 與某人分享某物
2．But I believe our friendship will never change．
believe后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
3．Wish you all success and good luck in the future．
wish sb sth祝愿某人怎樣

解答 My Speech for Prom Night
Dear teachers and classmates，
Good evening!I'm very proud to share something with you all．【高分句型】（發(fā)言感到自豪）
First，I'd like to thank all our teachers．We have learned a lot from you．You've developed our interests，skills and made us grow up happily．
Next，I should thank my classmates．We've studied together，helped each other and had a lot of fun．Soon we will go to new schools and may not see each other so often in the future．But I believe our friendship will never change．【高分句型】（感謝老師同學(xué)們以及原因）
Wish you all success and good luck in the future．【高分句型】（祝愿）
That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇看圖作文．看圖作文要注意一下幾點(diǎn)（1）弄清圖畫內(nèi)容，把握情節(jié)線索，根據(jù)圖畫在腦海中串聯(lián)出完整的故事，注意圖畫中的細(xì)節(jié)．（2）結(jié)合提示詞，明確考查意圖．所給提示詞可幫助理解畫面內(nèi)容，也是組成句子的必用材料．有時(shí)還會(huì)給出起始句（這就給出了時(shí)態(tài)），學(xué)生運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語(yǔ)，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型，作適當(dāng)展開，聯(lián)想，就能比較完整地表達(dá)出畫面的意思了．（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫．（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用．（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫，語(yǔ)法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)序，主謂一致等．