Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（本大題15分）

假如你是李明。明天是周六，你給漢口某校的朋友王鵬打電話，邀請(qǐng)他到黃陂游玩。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

乘292路公汽到黃陂汽車(chē)站，你們?cè)谀抢镆?jiàn)面；

2．明天天氣會(huì)很熱，要帶水；

3．穿運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋，爬木蘭山；

4. 木蘭山是黃陂最高的山峰，因花木蘭而出名；

4．請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充交代一兩件事。

要求：

1.不要逐條翻譯，內(nèi)容要連貫。

2.詞數(shù)：60-80 ．

參考詞匯： Huangpi Bus Station (黃陂汽車(chē)站) sports shoes （運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋）

Mount Mulan(木蘭山)

電話開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已給出：

Is Wang Peng there? Hi, this is Li Ming. I’d like to invite you to Huangpi to get relaxed tomorrow.

 

 

 

See you tomorrow.

 

Answer 1

Is Wang Peng there? Hi, this is Li Ming. I’d like to invite you to Huangpi to get relaxed tomorrow. You can take bus No.292 to Huangpi Bus Station and we'll meet over there. Tomorrow will be a hot day,I think you

should take some water. As you know Mount Mulan is very famous for Hua Mulan ,it’s the highest mountain here.We will climb Mount Mulan tomorrow, so remember to wear sports shoes. After that, I will also show you around some other places. Hope you can enjoy yourselves.

See you tomorrow.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)一封信。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。

考點(diǎn)：提示性作文。