Question

下面表格反映的是Andy一家10年來(lái)的變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)其內(nèi)容，以Changes to Andy’s family為題，寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告。

	Ten years ago	Now
Flat	A small flat with two rooms	A big flat with ten rooms
Vehicle	Two bikes	A car
Appliance	A 21-inch TV set	A big TV set and two small ones

要求：

1. 內(nèi)容充實(shí)，覆蓋要點(diǎn)；

2. 報(bào)告中要包含總結(jié)和感想；

3. 70詞左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Changes to Andy’s family

Great changes have taken place to Andy’s family in the past 10 years.

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Answer 1

Great changes have taken place to Andy’s family in the past 10 years.

Ten years ago, Andy’s family lived in a flat with two rooms. But now, their new flat has 10 rooms. In the past, his family had only two bikes. His parents rode them to work every day. Now, they own a car. In the past the family had only a 21-inch TV set. But now they have three TV sets. One of them is very large.

Life has become better and better these years. What will life be like in another 10 years?

【解析】

試題分析：這是篇命題作文。題目中已經(jīng)給出了寫作的要點(diǎn)和要求。寫作時(shí)，一定要注意要點(diǎn)的齊全，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。另外，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化，文章可使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)兩種時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致性。句子直接可適當(dāng)使用連詞增加文章的邏輯性。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

本文要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利。文中用到了一些常用的表達(dá)方式，例如Andy’s family lived in a flat with two rooms. Andy一家住在只有兩個(gè)房間的平房里；With，有。In the past, 在過(guò)去；. His parents rode them to work every day.他父母每天騎單車去上班；Life has become better and better these years.這些年生活變得越來(lái)越好；better and better越來(lái)越好。

考點(diǎn)：提綱式作文。