Question

假如你叫小明，你現(xiàn)在給剛認識的筆友Tony寫一封信。在信中你介紹自己的情況：八年級學生，家住衢州龍游；你的愛好是：收集賽車模型，喜歡運動，尤其是各種球類運動，對學習英語感興趣，也會唱很多英文歌；將來想去英國參觀、旅游或學習。

要求：字數(shù)70左右，表達要簡潔、清晰、流暢

Dear Tony,

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Yours

Xiaoming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tony,

I am so glad to introduce myself to you. I study in a junior middle school. I am in Grade Two. Now I live in Longyou,Quzhou.I am interested in collecting model cars. I like sports very much. Playing basketball is my favourite sport. I also enjoyed learning English. I like singing English songs. I have learned a lot of English songs since I began to study English. I take great interests in Britain and I am looking forward to visiting Britain and studying there in the future.

Best wishes,

Yours

Xiaoming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求給筆友Tony寫一封信，介紹自己的情況。這篇作文給出要點比較多，要理清要點，把要點一一表達出來。句型盡量要瘋豐富些，不要太過單一。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅介紹喜好時注意避免句式重復而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如在表達喜好時用了：be interested in doing, like…very much,…is my favorite …,enjoy doing等，使短文看起來句型豐富。另外在介紹學英語歌時，用到了現(xiàn)在完成時，look forward to doing，使文章增色不少。

考點：給材料作文