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根據(jù)提示,以“My Best Friend and I”為題寫一篇短文,比較你倆的特征,至少80字。
提示: 1.我的好友名叫琳達(dá);
2.在某些方面,我們看上去一樣;在某些方面,我們看起來(lái)不同;
3.我們都有黑眼睛,黑頭發(fā);
4.她比我高,比我文靜,很認(rèn)真;
5.我外向一點(diǎn),而且比她風(fēng)趣;
6.都喜歡讀書。
My Best Friend and I
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Answer 1

One possible version：
My Best Friend and I
I have a good friend. Her name is Linda. In some ways we look the same. But in other ways we are different. We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller and quieter than me. She is very careful. I’m a little more outgoing than her. I am also funnier than her. We both like reading. She is good at English. But I am good at Chinese.  We often help each other.

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我和我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及do well in等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的交友意愿。。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹我們的共同點(diǎn)與不同之處，最后指出我們的擅長(zhǎng)。此處用了 In some ways，a little more outgoing than，is good at ，am good at等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。