Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

“傳遞愛心，服務(wù)他人”是文明社會(huì)所倡導(dǎo)的理念。獅子會(huì)(the Lions)就是一個(gè)以此為宗旨的國際性服務(wù)團(tuán)體。楊敏是獅子會(huì)的一名成員，多年來她一直樂于助人。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示用英語寫一篇短文，向�？�的English World欄目投稿，簡要介紹楊敏的事跡，然后談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和打算。

	Ready to help others
	Yang Min ◆help others for years ◆go to the old people's home twice a month (cut hair. wash clothes, do some cleaning) ◆offer people umbrellas or raincoats on rainy days
	◆your opinion …… ◆your plan ……

要求：

1．短文內(nèi)容必須包含表格所提供的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名；

3．詞數(shù)：80 - 100（短文開頭已給出，僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）。

短文開頭：From time to time，we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most.

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Answer 1

【答案】

From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the

persons I admire most. As a member of the Lions, she has been helping others for many years. She goes to the old peopled home twice a month to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. Besides, on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free.

Fin deeply moved by her story. Fm going to start with small things around me. I plan to give books and clothes to children in poor villages. Whats more, Til ask my parents and more friends to join me. Small action can make a big difference. Let5s help those who need help!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。向�？�的English World欄目投稿，簡要介紹楊敏的事跡，然后談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)和打算。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，字?jǐn)?shù)在80至100之間。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，表達(dá)清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清楚，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求，沒有拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。