Question

李雷和他的同學(xué)要到圓山去春游。因?yàn)榇禾焓桥郎降淖詈脮r(shí)候。天氣好，即不會(huì)太冷也不會(huì)太熱。李雷和他的同學(xué)騎自行車去圓山，結(jié)果在路上，李雷拐錯(cuò)了彎，發(fā)生了交通事故，傷到了右腿。所以說(shuō)遵守交通規(guī)則對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō)非常重要。 我們平時(shí)必須遵守 交通規(guī)則。 1. 注意交通燈。紅燈停,綠燈行。 2.不要騎得太快，應(yīng)該靠右邊行。3. 騎車要小心，戴頭盔。 4. 不能違反交通規(guī)則， 否則會(huì)被罰款。

We should obey the traffic rules

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

We should obey the traffic rules

Li Lei and his classmates wanted to go to Mount Yuan for the spring field trip .Because spring is the best time to climb mountains. The weather is very fine .It’s not too cold and not too hot .Li Lei and his classmates decided to go there by bike. But on the way, Li Lei made a wrong turn, and a traffic accident happened. Li Lei’s right leg was hurt. (His classmates had to send him to the hospital.)So it’s very important for us to obey the traffic rules. First, when the lights turn red, we must stop. When the lights turn green, we can cross the road. Second, we shouldn’t ride too fast and we should ride on the right of the road. Third, we should always be careful and wear bicycle helmets when we ride bikes. Fourth, if we break the traffic rules, we’ll get a fine.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)題目要求可知本文主要以第一人稱書寫。在介紹春游及發(fā)生交通事故時(shí)要用一般過去時(shí)，但介紹交通規(guī)則時(shí)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，并使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should�？梢赃m當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞使得行文條理。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文作者使用序數(shù)詞逐條介紹交通規(guī)則，非常條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。