Question

你班計(jì)劃舉行一次以“My dream job”為話題的英文主題班會(huì)課，老師要求每位同學(xué)寫一篇短文，分享各自的“夢(mèng)想”，內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)方面：

1．你夢(mèng)想做什么工作；

2．你選擇這個(gè)工作的理由；

3．你為實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)夢(mèng)想要做的準(zhǔn)備。

注意：1．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；詞數(shù)70。開(kāi)頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．短文中不要出現(xiàn)具體的學(xué)校姓名和人名。

My dream job

Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job?

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Answer 1

Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job? My dream is to be a doctor in the future. I think it’s a great and interesting job. Because first I can help many patients. It’s a hard job but I don’t mind it. I can find some joy in this job. Second I think I can also help myself and my family If I can become a doctor in the future so I like my job.Third I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to be a doctor. Besides ,I can meet different people in my job every day and I can learn something from them. And I would like to hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor. I believe I can be a good doctor

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to be a doctor .I would like to hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor等，Because等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。