Question

1．你校組織一次與澳大利亞交流生的交流活動(dòng)，主題為"My Dream School"．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中的提示詞，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，描述你理想中的高中學(xué)校．

Campus （校園）	teachers & classmates	In class	After class．
large，beautiful， …	kind，friendly， …	free to choose subjects， a lot of practice …	clubs and sports， a little homework． …

要求：：（1 ）詞數(shù)：80～100．
（2 ）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名或校名．
（3 ）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
My Dream School
Ladies and gentlemen，
I'd like to share with you my dream school．The moment you enter this school．You will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there．
In this school，we are living like a big family．Teachers here are kind as parents and classmates get along well with each other like brothers and sisters．When in class，we are free to choose what we are interested in and are given a lot of time to practice．After class，instead of doing much homework，we can join different kinds of clubs and do whatever sports we like．
What do you think of my dream school？．
That's all．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是為"My Dream School"為題描述你理想中的高中學(xué)校．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1校園大而美麗
2老師同學(xué)友好善良
3課堂能自主選擇科目，很多練習(xí)
4課后有俱樂部運(yùn)動(dòng)，作業(yè)少
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
here and there四處
get along with sb與某人相處
instead of 而不是…
be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣
高分句型：
1．①When in class，we are free to choose ②what we are interested in and ③are given a lot of time ④to practice．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，完整表達(dá)是when we are in class，主從句的主語一致，且謂語含有be，故省略主語和謂語．
②what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為choose的賓語．
③一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)，主語是we是動(dòng)詞give的承受者，構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系．
④o practice動(dòng)詞不定式作為目的狀語．
2．After class，①instead of doing much homework，we can join different kinds of clubs and do ②whatever sports ③we like
①instead of代替，而不是，of是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
②whatever引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為do的賓語．
③we like是定語從句，修飾前面的sports，關(guān)系詞which/that是定語從句的賓語，故可以省略．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen，
I‘d like to share with you my dream school．The moment you enter this school．You will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there．（校園大而美麗）
In this school，we are living like a big family．Teachers here are kind as parents and  classmates get along well with each other like brothers and sisters．（老師同學(xué)友好善良）When in class，we are free to choose what we are interested in and are given a lot of time to practice．（高分句型）（課堂能自主選擇科目，很多練習(xí)）After class，instead of doing much homework，we can join different kinds of clubs and do whatever sports we like．（高分句型）
（課后有俱樂部運(yùn)動(dòng)，作業(yè)少）What do you think of my dream school？
That's all．Thanks for listening．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．