Question

每位同學(xué)都有自己喜歡的老師，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，以My teacher為題介紹一位你喜歡
的老師。
提示：1．外貌特征；      2．興趣愛(ài)好和性格特點(diǎn)；
3．你對(duì)他（她）的感情。
要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2. 應(yīng)用提示中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 60詞以上。
My teacher
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Answer 1

My teacher
I have a good teacher. She is a tall woman with black hair. She is a little fat. She has two big eyes and a small nose. She likes smiling. She is very kind and patient to us. And at the same time, she is strict in class. After class, she likes singing and playing with us. I like her very much. I think she is a very good teacher, and I want to be a teacher like her when I grow up.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以My teacher 為題，寫(xiě)一篇作文來(lái)介紹自己最喜歡的老師。題目中給了我們一些提示，我們可以從這幾個(gè)方面來(lái)介紹。一是老師的外貌特征，如高矮、胖瘦，頭發(fā)，五官等方面來(lái)介紹；二是老師的興趣愛(ài)好和性格特點(diǎn)，如老師喜歡什么，不喜歡什么，對(duì)學(xué)生如何等；三是你對(duì)老師的感情，這一部分要說(shuō)明自己喜歡老師的原因。這些描述人的外貌和性格的句型，我們?cè)诮滩闹卸加羞^(guò)接觸，所以表達(dá)的時(shí)候應(yīng)該問(wèn)題不大。但是要注意語(yǔ)句間的連接，以及表達(dá)的流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。作者從三個(gè)方面介紹了自己喜歡的老師。首先是外貌描寫(xiě)，She is a tall woman with black hair. She is a little fat. She has two big eyes and a small nose.這幾句話語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用正確，描寫(xiě)的很細(xì)致。然后作者介紹了老師的興趣愛(ài)好和性格特點(diǎn)，She likes smiling. She is very kind and patient to us. And at the same time, she is strict in class. After class, she likes singing and playing with us，這里使用的句型有be kind to sb., like doing sth., be strict with sb. 等。最后是自己對(duì)老師的感情，I like her very much. I think she is a very good teacher, and I want to be a teacher like her when I grow up.，最后這個(gè)句子中使用了when 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，是一個(gè)很好的句型。