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10．假如你叫大明，收到了你的英國(guó)朋友Tony的來(lái)信，信中他很關(guān)心四川雅安地震后學(xué)生的情況．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的來(lái)信內(nèi)容寫一封回信，感謝他對(duì)災(zāi)區(qū)學(xué)生的關(guān)心，回答他的問(wèn)題，并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?br />
提示詞語(yǔ)：thank you，care to，go on，government，offer，encourage，brave
Dear Daming，
I'm sorry to hear that a big earthquake happened in Ya'an，Sichuan．Some school buildings broke down in the earthquake and many students couldn't go to school．But I know the government is trying their best to help them．And Chinese people are so strong and brave that they aren't afraid of anything difficult．Can the students go on studying now？Please tell me more about them．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Tony

Dear Tony，
I'm glad to hear from you．Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya'an，Sichuan．Yes，the students can go on studying now．It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．But as quickly as possible，the government helped them find new places to go on studying．And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave．I think they are not alone．China is a big family and love is just around them
Best wishes．YoursDaming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給朋友寫一封回信，感謝他對(duì)災(zāi)區(qū)學(xué)生的關(guān)心，回答他的問(wèn)題，并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽�注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)及一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
來(lái)信的大意是：我很抱歉聽(tīng)到四川雅安發(fā)生大地震，一些學(xué)校建筑在地震中倒塌了，很多學(xué)生不能去上學(xué)了．但我知道政府盡力幫助他們．中國(guó)人是如此的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)和勇敢，他們不怕任何困難．現(xiàn)在學(xué)生們能繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)了嗎？請(qǐng)告訴我更多關(guān)于他們的事情．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1感謝關(guān)心
2回答問(wèn)題：現(xiàn)在學(xué)生們能繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)了嗎？
3其他更多信息．
4感受

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
thank you for  因?yàn)椤�感謝你
as…as possible 盡可能…
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
offer sb sth 提供某物給某人
encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．
it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
2．But①as quickly as possible，the government②helped them find new places ③to go on studying．
①as…as possible 盡可能…
②help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
③動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear Tony，
I'm very glad to hear from you．
Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya'an，Sichuan．（感謝關(guān)心）Yes，the students can go on studying now．（回答問(wèn)題）It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．【高分句型】But as quickly as possible，the government helped them find new places to go on studying．【高分句型】And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave．（更多信息--政府和熱心人幫忙）I think they are not alone．China is a big family and love is just around them．（感受）
Best wishes．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．