Question

凱特(Kate)有一個快樂的家庭，她和家人的信息在下列表格中。如果你是Kate，你將如何介紹自己和家人。請寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。要求語句通順，意思表達清楚。

Family members	Age (年齡)	Likes	Favorite things
Kate	11	Nice food	Hamburgers
Father	36	Sports	Soccer
Mother	34	New clothes	Sweaters

                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 

Answer 1

I’m Kate. I’m 11 years old. I like nice food. And my favorite food is hamburgers. I have a happy family, my father,my mother and I.My father is 36 years old. He likes to play sports. But his favorite sports is soccer. My mother is 34 years old. She likes new clothes. And her favorite clothes is sweaters. I love my family.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，Kate介紹自己的家人。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I like.......,my favorite......及She likes ......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要表達自己對家人的愛。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹我們的共同點與不同之處，最后指出我們的擅長。此處用了 likes to，play sports，her favorite clothes等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。