Question

生活中到處都有規(guī)則，所謂國(guó)有國(guó)法家有家規(guī)， 每所學(xué)校都有嚴(yán)格的校規(guī)，每個(gè)家庭也都有嚴(yán)格的家規(guī)，請(qǐng)你以“My … rules”為題，寫一篇120詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文介紹你熟知的規(guī)章制度（至少3條），并發(fā)表你的看法。
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Answer 1

My Family Rules
My parents are very strict.Because I have so many family rules. For example,I can't go out with my friends at school nights.On weekends, I have to go home before nine p.m. It's strict, but I  think it's necessary. And I must finish my homework in time. I can't play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself. I have to get up at six o'clock every morning.And I  have to be in bed by ten o'clock. Thanks to these rules,I can live healthily.But i think to be in bed by ten o'clock is unfair! Students need nine hours sleep! And I  think play some computer games is not badly. So I think the family rules can make some change.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者先寫自己的個(gè)人情況，包括所在學(xué)校、星座、性格、愛好，然后寫自己的煩惱，最后請(qǐng)求幫助。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如For example, go out,at school nights,On weekends,have to,go home,in time, wash clothes,by myself,get up,in bed,Thanks to等短語(yǔ)；文中還用到了賓語(yǔ)從句 it's necessary，to be in bed by ten o'clock is unfair，play some computer games is not badly；不定式做主語(yǔ)to be in bed。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。