Question

假如你叫Emma，想應(yīng)聘2010年上海世博會(huì)志愿者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的信息，用英文給組委會(huì)寫一篇簡(jiǎn)短的自薦信(應(yīng)聘的理由至少4條)。
要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2.適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，使短文完整、流暢。
Dear Madam/Sir,
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I think I have all the qualities to be a good volunteer. I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely
Emma

Answer 1

Dear Madam/Sir,
I’m writing to recommend myself as a volunteer for 2010 World Expo. I’m honest and helpful. My hobbies are playing volleyball and reading books. I’m very friendly and get on well with my classmates. I’m very good at English. I have known a lot about 2010 World Expo from newspapers and TV. The World Expo can help the world know more about China. I’d like to be the volunteer because it’s an excellent chance for me to learn team spirit and communicate with the foreign friends. I can become more confident by practicing English. I think I have all the qualities to be a good volunteer. I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely

試題分析：本題是應(yīng)用文寫作，所給材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞材料確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容可知要用簡(jiǎn)單句，包括主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)等。根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容本文人稱主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確，尤其要注意短文開頭結(jié)尾書信的書寫格式。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：應(yīng)用文寫作不同于其他作文的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是格式問題，需要注意英語書信的書寫格式不同于中文書信。另外就是寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。