Question

提示：我們生活在一個(gè)安寧的社會(huì)，父母每天為我們準(zhǔn)備好吃的和穿的，老師每天為我們傳授知識(shí)，朋友一直在給予我們支持與鼓勵(lì)。這一切，我們看在眼里，也記在心里。在畢業(yè)之際，請(qǐng)以“Thanks”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章,表達(dá)你的感恩之情。

要求：1．根據(jù)所給題目，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；

2．語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔;

3．文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；

4．書(shū)面表達(dá)必須寫在答題卷上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Mom, thank you for so many years of my education and training, ignorance of the past, I always make you angry, but now I grow up, self-reliance, and I feel that I should not be so naive。I will work hard at all the subjects.I will not live up to your expectations! I'm really grateful to my mother to take care of me. When I was sick, my mother is always did her best to take care of me. When I failed the examination, my mother also encouraged me to refresh, not to become disheartened. Really grateful to what my mother has done.I know it was my mother's help that made me learned how to perform well in my life. I really would like to thank my mother. I think in this world, I love you more than anyone.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，以“Thanks”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章,表達(dá)你的感恩之情。由于在要點(diǎn)中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題，根據(jù)要求可知本句主要是過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: thank you for so many years of my education and training謝謝你這么多年對(duì)我的教育和培養(yǎng)；I will work hard at all the subjects. 我會(huì)努力學(xué)習(xí)所有的科目；When I failed the examination, my mother also encouraged me to refresh, not to become disheartened. 當(dāng)我考試不及格，媽媽也鼓勵(lì)我振作，不要灰心等等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：提示性作文。