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4．為了生活得更舒適、便捷，人類在不斷開發(fā)利用資源，研發(fā)高科技產(chǎn)品．與此同時(shí)，我們的生存環(huán)境也會(huì)受到影響．為了建設(shè)資源節(jié)約型、環(huán)境友好型城市，青島市政府提出了"Creatingbeautifulenvironment，buildingpleasanthomes"的理念．請(qǐng)以此為題，根據(jù)自己的親身感受或所見(jiàn)所聞，用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的看法．
寫作要求：
1．參考圖表中所給提示，任選兩個(gè)方面，談?wù)勊鼈兊睦�與弊．
2．作為中學(xué)生，應(yīng)該怎么做？怎樣帶動(dòng)家人、朋友及社區(qū)的人們，為建設(shè)我們美 好的家園而努力．寫出至少2種具體做法．
3．詞數(shù)80〜100．（標(biāo)題和開頭句不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Creating Beautiful Environment，Building Pleasant Homes
With the help of high technology，life is getting more and more comfortable and convenient．Most families have refrigerators，computers，mobile phones，cars and so on．We can eat kinds of fresh fruit and vegetables all year round．
However，at the same time，green land has become less and more pollution has been caused．
As students，we really need to do something，such as going to school on foot，by bicycle or by bus instead of by car．We should save water and energy at any time and anywhere．We could urge more people to recycle waste paper，bottles，batteries and many other things．
If everyone does a bit，our homes will become more pleasant and beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"Creating beautiful environment，building pleasant homes"為題根據(jù)自己的親身感受或所見(jiàn)所聞，用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己對(duì)建設(shè)資源節(jié)約型、環(huán)境友好型城市的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．參考圖表中所給提示，任選兩個(gè)方面，談?wù)勊鼈兊睦�與弊．
2．作為中學(xué)生，應(yīng)該怎么做？怎樣帶動(dòng)家人、朋友及社區(qū)的人們，為建設(shè)我們美好的家園而努力，寫出至少2種具體做法．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
all year round一年到頭
cause pollution產(chǎn)生污染
at the same time同時(shí)
instead of而不是
need to do需要做某事
【高分句型】
1．As students，we really need to do something，①such as going to school on foot，by bicycle or by bus ②instead of by car．
①such as意為"例如，諸如此類的，像…那樣的"，相當(dāng)于like或for example．
②Instead of 是個(gè)短語(yǔ)介詞．意思是"代替…"、"而不…"，后可以加上短語(yǔ)．
2．If everyone does a bit，our homes will become more pleasant and beautiful．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 Creating Beautiful Environment，Building Pleasant Homes
With the help of high technology，life is getting more and more comfortable and convenient．Most families have refrigerators，computers，mobile phones，cars and so on．We can eat kinds of fresh fruit and vegetables all year round．（高科技給人們生活帶來(lái)的好處）
However，at the same time，green land has become less and more pollution has been caused．（同時(shí)給環(huán)境帶來(lái)的污染問(wèn)題）
As students，we really need to do something，such as going to school on foot，by bicycle or by bus instead of by car．【高分句型】We should save water and energy at any time and anywhere．We could urge more people to recycle waste paper，bottles，batteries and many other things．（以身作則做的事情）
If everyone does a bit，our homes will become more pleasant and beautiful．【高分句型】（總結(jié)主題）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．