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11．假如外商布朗先生將來(lái)紅光帽廠洽談業(yè)務(wù)，請(qǐng)你以該廠銷(xiāo)售員的身份，在答題卡指定的位置上用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，向他介紹工廠概況，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．紅光帽廠建于1998年；
2．現(xiàn)有約200名工人，其中多數(shù)是中學(xué)畢業(yè)后回鄉(xiāng)的學(xué)生；技師來(lái)自上海的大工廠；
3．工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量?jī)?yōu)良；
4．銷(xiāo)售情況和合作愿望．
注意：
1．短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順；
2．第4要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話(huà)展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾均已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：質(zhì)量  quality
Mr Brown，
Welcome to the Red Light Hat Factory!Our factory was set up in 1998．It has about 200 workers．Most of them were high school students．After they finished school，they returned to their home town．The engineers come from the big factor ies in Shanghai． Our factory mainly makes hats for children and women．The hats are of good quality．They sell well in the markets of Europe．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．Orders for our hats are welcome!
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以紅光帽廠銷(xiāo)售員的身份，向外商布朗先生介紹工廠概況．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．紅光帽廠建于1998年；
2．現(xiàn)有約200名工人，其中多數(shù)是中學(xué)畢業(yè)后回鄉(xiāng)的學(xué)生；技師來(lái)自上海的大工廠；
3．工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量?jī)?yōu)良；
4．銷(xiāo)售情況和合作愿望．

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
set up 建立
come from 來(lái)自
of good quality 質(zhì)量好

【高分句型】
1．Our factory was set up in 1998．
一般過(guò)去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)--was/were+過(guò)去分詞，set up建立．
2．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．
 more hats than 比較級(jí)的運(yùn)用．

解答 Mr Brown，
Welcome to the Red Light Hat Factory!Our factory was set up in 1998．【高分句型】（紅光帽廠建于1998年）It has about 200 workers．Most of them were high school students．After they finished school，they returned to their home town．The engineers come from the big factories in Shanghai．（現(xiàn)有約200名工人，其中多數(shù)是中學(xué)畢業(yè)后回鄉(xiāng)的學(xué)生；技師來(lái)自上海的大工廠）
   Our factory mainly makes hats for children and women．The hats are of good quality．（工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量?jī)?yōu)良）They sell well in the markets of Europe．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．【高分句型】Orders for our hats are welcome!（銷(xiāo)售情況和合作愿望）
Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫(xiě)作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．