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提示:1,Tom今年13歲,是我們班的尖子生,但身體不太好;2.他經(jīng)常吃漢堡、雞肉和冰淇淋,但很少吃蔬菜和水果3.他各頓飯之間還吃甜點(diǎn),很少運(yùn)動(dòng);4.他覺得是改變他的飲食習(xí)慣和生活方式的時(shí)候了;5.他打算每天跑步30分鐘,每周游泳兩次;多吃蔬菜,多喝水,因?yàn)樗亲詈玫娘嬃,它不含有熱量?/span>

Tom's lifestyle

 

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Tom's lifestyle

Tom is 13 years old. He is a top student in our class, but he is not healthy. He often eats hamburgers, chicken and ice cream. He seldom eats vegetables and fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals. He doesn't like sports. He feels that it's time for him to change his diet and lifestyle. He plans to run for 30 minutes every day and go swimming twice a week. He wants to eat more vegetables and drink much water, because water is the best drink. It has no calories.

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試題分析:

這是一篇給材料作文,介紹湯姆的生活方式。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:He is ......He often eats......;He wants to......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了湯姆不健康的生活方式,接下來介紹此處用了 between meals,it's time for him toplans to,every day 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn):提綱作文。

 

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