Question

11．最近你和你的同學(xué)就"中學(xué)生目前存在的問題"展開了討論． 現(xiàn)在請你以此為話題，參照表內(nèi)提供的信息，寫一篇短文．

Problems	Causes	Advice
1．a(chǎn)rgue with parents	--------	have a talk with parents，understand each other
2．can't sleep well before exams	anxious about grades	--------
3．feel lonely	-------	--------

注意：
1．開頭部分已寫好，你只需接著寫．
2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，和你所補(bǔ)全的信息．
3．詞數(shù)：不少于80個．
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems．Some of my classmates say they often argue with their parents．That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to d o what they like．If they have a talk with their parents，the y can understand each other．
Some say they can't sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades．They should take a long walk to relax before going to bed．
Some also say they feel lonely because they don't know how to make friends．As the only kid in the family，students should ta ke part in some after-school activities and learn to communicate with others．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是總結(jié)中學(xué)生目前存在的問題的討論結(jié)果．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．和父母吵架--原因--建議：與父母交流，彼此理解；
2．考試前睡不好--原因：擔(dān)心成績--建議
3．感覺孤獨--原因--建議
常用到的重點短語：
argue with sb 與某人爭吵
ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
have a talk with sb 與某人交談
be anxious about 擔(dān)心
make friends  交朋友
take part in參加
communicate with sb 與某人交流
【高分句型】
1．That is①because their parents always ②ask them to study and they feel③they have no free time to do④what they like．
①because引導(dǎo)的從句作為表語，與is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
②ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
③feel后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②do后是what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．
2．Some say①they can't sleep well before exams ②because they are anxious about the grades．
①say后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．be anxious about 擔(dān)心
3．They should take a long walk①to relax②before going to bed
①動詞不定式作為目的狀語．
②before going to bed是before they go to bed的縮寫．

解答 Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems．
Some of my classmates say they often argue with their parents．That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like．【高分句型】If they have a talk with their parents，they can understand each other．（和父母吵架原因和建議）
 Some say they can't sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades．【高分句型】They should take a long walk to relax before going to bed．【高分句型】（考試前睡不好原因和建議）
  Some also say they feel lonely because they don't know how to make friends．As the only kid in the family，students should take part in some after-school activities and learn to communicate with others．（感覺孤獨原因和建議）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點．動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題．寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
這篇短文多次使用主從復(fù)合句為文章增色不少．如That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like．這是因為他們的父母總是要求他們學(xué)習(xí)，他們覺得他們沒有空閑的時間做自己喜歡的．If they have a talk with their parents，they can understand each other如果他們與他們的父母交談，他們可以互相了解．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．