Question

7．為了使同學(xué)們更加健康快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議．假如你是王波，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)向校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一篇建議信．

內(nèi)容包括：	Suggestions for a Better School Life
	學(xué)校	老師
	﹡常開(kāi)放圖書(shū)館 ﹡組織更多課后活動(dòng) ﹡給予我們更多的運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)間 ﹡少組織考試 ﹡﹍﹍	﹡讓課堂更有趣 ﹡課堂上說(shuō)得更簡(jiǎn)單明了一些 ﹡準(zhǔn)時(shí)下課 ﹡布置少一點(diǎn)作業(yè) ﹡﹍﹍

作文要求：
1 文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．語(yǔ)句連貫，80詞左右．
2 不能在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名．作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear headmaster，
    I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school  willopen the library more often．Second，I thinkour school can organize more after-class activities． Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting． And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，wewill be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                           Yours 
                                                             sincerely，
                                                                  Wang B．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是提出一些為了使同學(xué)們更加健康快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)的建議，給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1學(xué)校（1）常開(kāi)放圖書(shū)館（2）組織更多的課后活動(dòng)；（3）給予我們更多的運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)間（4）少組織考試
2老師：（1）讓課堂更有趣；（2）課堂上說(shuō)得更簡(jiǎn)單明了一些；（3）準(zhǔn)時(shí)下課（4）布置少一點(diǎn)作業(yè)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
make+sth+adj讓某物怎樣
be interested in 感興趣
what's more 再者
on time 準(zhǔn)時(shí)
【高分句型】
1．And I suggest①our school should organize fewer exams②as well．
①suggest后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②as well 也，放句末．
2．And①if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will②be more interested in studying and have more time③to practice．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②be interested in 感興趣
③動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．
3．①What's more，I hope ②they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
①what's more 再者
②hope后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．on time 準(zhǔn)時(shí)

解答 Dear Headmaster，
     I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will open the library more often．（常開(kāi)放圖書(shū)館）Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．（組織更多的課后活動(dòng)） Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．（更多的時(shí)間運(yùn)動(dòng)）And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（少組織考試）【高分句型】
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．（讓課堂更有趣） And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．【高分句型】（課堂上說(shuō)得更簡(jiǎn)單明了一些）What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．【高分句型】（準(zhǔn)時(shí)下課；布置少一點(diǎn)作業(yè)）
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                             
Yours sincerely，
 Wang Bo

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇應(yīng)用文，注意信件的格式，主要是提出建議，注意表達(dá)的委婉性，考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少