Question

美國(guó)男孩Eric來(lái)信想在北京征詢筆友。假如你是Liu Xing，你想和Eric成為筆友。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中所提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)給Eric寫(xiě)一封回信，介紹你自己的情況。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì)在內(nèi)。要求：字跡工整清楚，60字左右。
Name: Liu Xing              Age:13
Live in: Beijing              Date of birth :November 19th, 1999
A sports collection: 3 soccer balls 5 basketballs 6 volleyballs
Favorite food: fruit/healthy    
Hobbies: play basketball / listen to music
Favorite subject : science / difficult but interesting
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your letter. I know you want a pen pal in Beijing. I want to __________
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Please write to me soon.       
Yours,
Liu Xing

Answer 1

Dear Eric,
Thanks for your letter. I know you want a pen pal in Beijing. I want to make friends with you. My name is Liu Xing. I’m a 13-year-old boy. I live in Beijing. My birthday is on November 19th.I love sports. I have a big sports collection. I have 3 soccer balls, 5 basketballs and 6 volleyballs. And I often play sports with my friends after school. 
I also like playing basketball and listening to music. Do you know what my favorite subject is ?  science. I think it’s difficult but interesting. What about you？
Please writer to me soon.
Yours,
Liu Xing

試題分析：
本文是書(shū)信，給出一定的漢語(yǔ)提示。給考生發(fā)揮的余地 較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇句式要賦予變化，這樣才能證明你能更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)整體。最后要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯與高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。因?yàn)槭菚?shū)信，故時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)較好，注意人稱的轉(zhuǎn)換并且注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文出現(xiàn)一些比較常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)make friends with與某人做朋友 after school課下 listen to 聽(tīng) like doing喜歡做某事。I also like playing basketball and listening to music這個(gè)句子中and連接兩個(gè)并且的動(dòng)名詞形式 。Do you know what my favorite subject is這個(gè)句子考查動(dòng)詞的賓語(yǔ)從句，由特殊疑問(wèn)詞引導(dǎo)用正常語(yǔ)序。I think it’s difficult but interesting這個(gè)句子中用it做形式主語(yǔ)。本文出現(xiàn)比較高級(jí)詞匯如favorite difficult interesting為文章增色不少。