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2．你校將舉行"校園之星（Campus Star）"評(píng)選活動(dòng)，各班就"校園之星"的評(píng)選標(biāo)準(zhǔn)展開(kāi)了討論．以下是你班同學(xué)的部分觀點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)將這些觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整理．并結(jié)合你自已的想法，寫一篇 發(fā)言稿參加學(xué)生會(huì)評(píng)選委員會(huì)的討論．

同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)	誠(chéng)實(shí)禮貌，有漫心  有愛(ài)心
	學(xué)習(xí)勤奮，有進(jìn)步
	興趣廣泛，有特長(zhǎng)
	…
你的觀點(diǎn)	…

注意l．發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括表中信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；
2．開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），你只需接著寫；
3．文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
4．詞數(shù)：80一110．
Hello，everybody!I'm very glad to be here to share our opinions on"Campus Star"with you．As a star，he/sheHello，everybody!I'm very glad to be here to share our opinions on"Campus Star"with you．As a star，he/she should be an honest person first．He is also polite and ready to help others any time． Second，a Campus Star should be not only a top student but also a good learner．He studies hard，and makes great progress every term．Third，a star should have wide interests．He takes an active part in sports and other activities．And he is popular at school．
　In my opinion，a Campus Star must be a green person．He loves nature．He takes care of the trees and grass around him and tries his best to protect the environment． That's all．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是就"校園之星"的評(píng)選標(biāo)準(zhǔn)將同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整理再說(shuō)說(shuō)自己的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)（1）誠(chéng)實(shí)禮貌，有漫心  有愛(ài)心；（2）學(xué)習(xí)勤奮，有進(jìn)步；（3）興趣廣泛，有特長(zhǎng)
2我的觀點(diǎn)

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be ready to do sth準(zhǔn)備好做某事
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
make progress取得進(jìn)步
in one's opinion依某人看來(lái)
take care of照顧
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事

高分句型：
1．Second，a Campus Star should be not only a top student but also a good learner．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…，連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等的成分，這里是連接兩個(gè)名詞短語(yǔ)．
2．He ①takes care of the trees and grass ②around him and ③tries his best to protect the environment．
①take care of照顧
②around him介詞短語(yǔ)作為后置定語(yǔ)，修飾前面的trees and grass．
③try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事．

解答 Hello，everybody!I'm very glad to be here to share our opinions on"Campus Star"with you．As a star，he/she should be an honest person first．He is also polite and ready to help others any time．（誠(chéng)實(shí)禮貌，有愛(ài)心） Second，a Campus Star should be not only a top student but also a good learner．（高分句型）He studies hard，and makes great progress every term．（學(xué)習(xí)勤奮，有進(jìn)步）Third，a star should have wide interests．He takes an active part in sports and other activities．And he is popular at school．（興趣廣泛，有特長(zhǎng)）
In my opinion，a Campus Star must be a green person．He loves nature．He takes care of the trees and grass around him and tries his best to protect the environment．（高分句型） That's all．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．