Question

書面表達(dá) (10分)

期中考試后我們將有一次春游，請根據(jù)以下表格所提供的信息向大家介紹，寫一篇不少于70個單詞的短文。

Time	Place	Activity
8:30 a.m.	At the gate of Zuohai Park	meet everyone
9:00 a.m.- 11:30 a.m.	In the park	fly kites, play games
11:30 a.m.	By the lake	have lunch
1:00 p.m.		go to the museum by bus
1:30 p.m.- 4:00 p.m.	Fuzhou Museum	visit the museum
4:00 P.m.		go back home

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Answer 1

Hello everyone! We are going to have a spring outing after mid-term examination. Here is some important information I want to tell you. On that day we’ll meet at the gate of Zuohai Park at 8:30 a.m. Then we’ll fly kites and play games in the park from 9:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. At 11:30 a.m. we will have lunch by the lake. After that we’ll go to the museum by bus at 1:00 p.m. We will visit Fuzhou Museum from 1:30 p.m. to 4:00p.m. And we’ll go home at 4:00p.m.

That’s all. Hope you have a good time.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一一篇短文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。

考點(diǎn)：提示性作文。