Question

人的一生中會(huì)有很多朋友，有的朋友熱情大方；有的朋友文靜優(yōu)雅；有的朋友樂于助人；有的朋友事不關(guān)己，高高掛起，……。你喜歡什么樣的朋友？ 請(qǐng)你以 “I like friends who…” 為題，寫一篇約100詞的英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />要求：1. 先把題目補(bǔ)充完整（可用outgoing, active, quiet; ready to help others等）；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
I like friends who are__________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

There are many friends in our life. Of all, I like friends who are outgoing. Firstly, these friends are easy for me to get along with. Even though sometimes we are angry with each other, we will forget the unpleasant moments quickly and soon become friends again. Secondly, Friends who are outgoing usually bring us more pleasure. I have a friend called Mary. She is a sunshine girl. We like watching movies and go shopping together. Sometimes we discuss everything that we are bothnterested in. What’s more, the outgoing friends are brave enough to face challenges and seldom give up. So, friends who are outgoing are the most popular in the world, I think.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者陳列幾點(diǎn)喜歡外向朋友的原因，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如Of all ,get along with,even though,are angry with ,each other ,be interested in,what’s more, give up, in the world等短語；多次使用定語從句如friends who are outgoing；同時(shí)使用了 firstly,secondly,what’s more,so使文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。