Question

寫一篇短文，把你的好朋友Linda向大家做一個(gè)介紹，Linda的情況如下：
1．女孩，13歲，來(lái)自英國(guó)。
2．是第一中學(xué)的一個(gè)學(xué)生（No.1 Junior High School）;
3.矮個(gè)，長(zhǎng)發(fā)，圓臉，大鼻子，大眼睛；
4．她的電話號(hào)碼：010（8257799）
提示詞：be from,round,telephone number.
要求：1.把所有信息表達(dá)完整。2.適當(dāng)增加一些內(nèi)容。3.詞數(shù)：60個(gè)詞左右。
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Answer 1

Hello,everyone!
This is my good friend Linda.She is a girl.She is thirteen years old and she is from England.Linda is in No.1 Junior High School.Her favorite subject is math.She is short and she has long hair and a round face.She has a big nose and two big eyes. She is beautiful and she often helps us. We all like her.Her telephone number is 010(8257799).

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：She is thirteen years old ,she is from England,Linda is in No.1 Junior High School.Her favorite subject is math.She is short and she has long hair.Her telephone number is 010(8257799).等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。