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8．在一節(jié)寫(xiě)作課上，老師要求你們寫(xiě)一篇名為"心目中的同學(xué)"的短文，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你用英文來(lái)介紹一下你的同學(xué)Mike．
1）Mike學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，喜歡思考，能想出許多有創(chuàng)意的點(diǎn)子；
2）他小時(shí)候讀了許多有關(guān)科學(xué)家的書(shū)籍，愛(ài)迪生的故事對(duì)他影響最大；
3）他對(duì)搞小發(fā)明很著迷，迄今為止，他已幾次因其發(fā)明獲獎(jiǎng)；
4）現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)忙碌，但他從未放棄愛(ài)好，他說(shuō)這真是其樂(lè)無(wú)窮；
5）他的夢(mèng)想…我認(rèn)為…
注意事項(xiàng)：
1）短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2）第5要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容必須用2至3句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
有創(chuàng)意的  creative    愛(ài)迪生  Edison
My classmate Mike is hard-working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是介紹一下你的同學(xué)Mike．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1）Mike學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，喜歡思考，能想出許多有創(chuàng)意的點(diǎn)子；
2）他小時(shí)候讀了許多有關(guān)科學(xué)家的書(shū)籍，愛(ài)迪生的故事對(duì)他影響最大；
3）他對(duì)搞小發(fā)明很著迷，迄今為止，他已幾次因其發(fā)明獲獎(jiǎng)；
4）現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)忙碌，但他從未放棄愛(ài)好，他說(shuō)這真是其樂(lè)無(wú)窮；
5）他的夢(mèng)想…我認(rèn)為…
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
come up with 想出…
be crazy about 對(duì)…著迷
give up 放棄
be known for 因…而著名
【高分句型】
1．His dream is ①to be an inventor②as great as Edison．
①動(dòng)詞不定式做表語(yǔ)，和be動(dòng)詞is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
②as…as與…一樣．
2．I think①he will ②be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day
①后接省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②be known for 因…而著名

解答 My classmate Michael is hard-working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．（Mike學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，喜歡思考，能想出許多有創(chuàng)意的點(diǎn)子）In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．（他小時(shí)候讀了許多有關(guān)科學(xué)家的書(shū)籍，愛(ài)迪生的故事對(duì)他影響最大）He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．（他對(duì)搞小發(fā)明很著迷，迄今為止，他已幾次因其發(fā)明獲獎(jiǎng)）Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．（現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)忙碌，但他從未放棄愛(ài)好，他說(shuō)這真是其樂(lè)無(wú)窮）His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．【高分句型】（他的夢(mèng)想是成為像愛(ài)迪生一樣的發(fā)明家）I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day．【高分句型】（我認(rèn)為他會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無(wú)把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣