Question

Cindy Brown是一位美術(shù)老師，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹她的外貌、飲食愛好及上周日的活動(dòng)。要求：1. 條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、書寫規(guī)范。2. 70詞左右。

	Looks like	Breakfast	Lunch	Dinner	Activities last Sunday
棕色卷發(fā)、中等身高	牛奶、雞蛋和面條	漢堡包和蘋果	米飯、魚、花椰菜和胡蘿卜	教學(xué)生畫畫；看了一個(gè)有趣的訪談節(jié)目

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Answer 1

Cindy Brown is an art teacher. She is very beautiful. She has curly brown hair and she is of medium height. She usually has milk, eggs and noodles for breakfast. She likes hamburgers and apples for lunch. For dinner, she likes rice, fish, broccoli and carrots. Last Sunday, Cindy taught students to draw pictures. Some students drew very well. Then she saw an interesting talk show. She had a busy Sunday.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求介紹美術(shù)老師Cindy Brown的外貌、飲食愛好及上周日的活動(dòng)。給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，在寫作時(shí)要注意使用正確的句型，通俗的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)每個(gè)要點(diǎn)，不能遺漏。人稱是第三人稱單數(shù)形式，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式。做到條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、書寫規(guī)范。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，句子表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。對(duì)于一個(gè)初一年級(jí)的學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，已經(jīng)做得很不錯(cuò)了。如：she is of medium height. Last Sunday, Cindy taught students to draw pictures.等。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。