Question

4．Write at least 60words about the topic"A model student"（以"一個模范學生"為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
Suggested questions：
•Who is a model student？
•What can you learn from him or her？
•Do you like to be a model student？
•What are you going to do to be a model student？

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He often helps me with my English．他經常幫我學英語．
help sb with sth．表示在某方面幫助某人
【高分句型二】
It is  our duty to protect our world．保護我們的世界是我們的責任．
It is one's duty to do sth．表示"做某事是某人的責任"是固定句型．

解答 A Model Student
 I have a good friend in my class．His name is Li Lei．I think he is a model Student．【指出模范生是誰】
Li Lei is a kind boy．He likes helping others．He often helps me with my English．【高分句型】Now my English is better than before．Also，LiLei often rides bike to school and plants trees and so on．He says it is our duty to protect our world．【高分句型】【模范生的事跡】
   I think friends should be similar．I decide to be a person like LiLei．I will help others and protect our environment．【所學所感】

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．