假如你是張明,你在學(xué)校學(xué)生會里看到一項(xiàng)關(guān)于學(xué)生遇到的種種“煩惱”的調(diào)查。請你閱讀以下20位學(xué)生填寫的調(diào)查表,然后從中選擇你認(rèn)為最大的煩惱,并根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)或體會,給出建議,100左右。要求:
1.根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,選出一種煩惱,并給出建議。
2.邏輯清楚,語句通順,行文流暢,自由發(fā)揮,觀點(diǎn)不限, 無需標(biāo)題。
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Problems
Numbers of students
Do badly in lessons.
6
Don’t get on well with classmates.
5
Feel lonely at school. 
4
Don’t have much free time. 
3
Become fat.
2

I am Zhangming. I think it's not strange to have worries. Some students say they have become fat and that it really makes them feel bad about themselves.I think this is one of the biggest worries for us.But I think we can do something about it.
First, you could eat less. The body needs food for energy, but you’ll become fat if you eat more than your body needs. If you eat less, the body can burn more calories than you eat. Second, do more exercise. Doing exercise can also help the body burn the calories and make you thinner. There are many ways to do exercise. For example, you could go to school on foot or by bike.
Don't worry too much.I think you will become fit soon.

試題分析:這是一篇給材料的話題作文。我們要從提示的表格內(nèi)選擇一種“煩惱”來作為材料寫。用正確的英語把如何解決這個煩惱的建議表達(dá)出來。動筆前要組織語言材料,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文應(yīng)該是在表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn),注意語氣的婉轉(zhuǎn)禮貌。會正確地表達(dá)建議。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文的邏輯順序。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了固定的句式和短語,為文章增色不少.如: it's not strange to,it really makes them feel bad about,one of the biggest worries等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用。因?yàn)槭褂昧艘恍┍硎卷樞虻倪B詞,表達(dá)建議的句子也有條理,如:First, Second,和For example,等等。
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