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3．2010年4月，青海玉樹發(fā)生了地震（earthquake），家園、學(xué)校受到了損壞．一名 災(zāi)區(qū)的學(xué)生（Zhuoma）下周將來你們班．她將在你們班學(xué)習(xí)一年．請根據(jù)表格提示，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾螏椭�她，并適當(dāng)寫出自己的想法．

卓瑪（Zhuoma）	On weekdays	On weekends
年齡：13歲 家鄉(xiāng)：青海玉樹	1．帶她參觀校園 2．送她學(xué)習(xí)用品 3．在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助她 4…	1．請她來家里 2．一起吃飯 3…

注意字?jǐn)?shù)要控制在80〜100詞左右．
2．不要出現(xiàn)你的姓名和學(xué)校信息．
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Zhuoma will come to our class next week．She's fromYushu，Qinghai．In her hometown，she couldn't go to school because of the earthquake．She'll study with us for a year．As her new classmate，I'll try my best to help her．When she comes，I'll introduce my friends to her and show her around our school．On weekdays，I'm going to give her some school things．I'm good at English，so I can help her with her English．I'll help her join our English club．
Maybe she is lonely on weekends，I can invite her to my home．We'll have dinner together．Then，we can play games or watch TV．
I'll do my best to make her happy and feel at home．In my opinion，all Chinese come from a family．We should help each other．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀銓⑷绾螏椭鷣碜詾?zāi)區(qū)的學(xué)生，并適當(dāng)寫出自己的想法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1卓瑪（Zhuoma）：年齡：13歲 家鄉(xiāng)：青海玉樹
2上學(xué)期間：1）．帶她參觀校園2）．送她學(xué)習(xí)用品3）．在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助她 4）…
3周末：1）請她來家里2）一起吃飯 3）…
4自己的想法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
be from 來自
because of 由于
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
be good at 擅長
help sb with sth 幫助某人做某事
make sb+adj 讓某人怎么樣的
【高分句型】
1．In her hometown，she couldn't go to school because of the earthquake．
because of 由于，of是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動名詞．
2．①When she comes，I'll introduce my friends to her and②show her around our school．
①when所引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②show sb around …帶某人參觀

解答 Zhuoma will come to our class next week．Zhuoma，a 13-year-old girl，is from Yushu，Qinghai．（卓瑪：年齡：13歲 家鄉(xiāng)：青海玉樹）In her hometown，she couldn't go to school because of the earthquake．【高分句型】She'll study with us for a year．As her new classmate，I'll try my best to help her．When she comes，I'll introduce my friends to her and show her around our school．【高分句型】（帶她參觀校園）On weekdays，I'm going to give her some school things．（送她學(xué)習(xí)用品）I'm good at English，so I can help her with her English．（在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助她）I'll help her join our English club．（參加俱樂部）
Maybe she is lonely on weekends，I can invite her to my home．（請她來家里）We'll have dinner together．（一起吃飯）Then，we can play games or watch TV．（一起玩游戲看電視）
I'll do my best to make her happy and feel at home．In my opinion，all Chinese come from a family．We should help each other．（自己的想法）

點(diǎn)評 提綱圖表式作文屬于控制性寫作的范疇．學(xué)生在寫作時應(yīng)仔細(xì)分析圖表，引證典型數(shù)據(jù)并按提綱要求進(jìn)行取材與構(gòu)思．本文中寫作時要特別注意兩類人的觀點(diǎn)的描述．要在比較中得出自己的結(jié)論和觀點(diǎn)．