Question

7．你的家長(zhǎng)或老師可能經(jīng)常和你談學(xué)習(xí)問(wèn)題．請(qǐng)你敘述一次你的家長(zhǎng)或老師對(duì)你談學(xué)習(xí)的情景、內(nèi)容以及你的感想．
要求：1）不使用真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息．
2）內(nèi)容完整，書寫整齊．詞數(shù)80-100．
When I was in Grade 7，my English was very poor．I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class．I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English．One day，Mrs Zhang，my English teacher asked me to go to her office and had a long talk with me．She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice．This helped me a lot．I became confident from then on and made much progress．I believe my English will be much better in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是敘述一次你的家長(zhǎng)或老師對(duì)你談學(xué)習(xí)的情景、內(nèi)容以及你的感想．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從兩個(gè)大的方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．家長(zhǎng)或老師對(duì)我談學(xué)習(xí)的情景、內(nèi)容
2．我的感想

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
so…that如此…以至于…
give up放棄
ask sb to do sth讓某人做某事
from then on從那時(shí)開始
make progress取得進(jìn)步
in the future將來(lái)
高分句型：
I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class．
句中的even表示甚至，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣，說(shuō)明上文說(shuō)到英語(yǔ)差的程度，這里還有what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．
I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English．
so…that表示如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的是結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 When I was in Grade 7，my English was very poor．I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class．（高分句型）I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English．（高分句型）One day，Mrs Zhang，my English teacher asked me to go to her office and had a long talk with me．She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice．（情景和內(nèi)容）This helped me a lot．I became confident from then on and made much progress．I believe my English will be much better in the future．（我的感想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出．寫作時(shí)先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來(lái)，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要結(jié)合活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)．