Question

據(jù)報道，中學生的身體素質(zhì)有所下降。這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會的關注和教育部門的高度重視。請你根據(jù)下面的要點和要求，用英語寫一篇短文，80字左右。
要點：1．鍛煉身體的好處：strong, healthy, energetic,…
2．鍛煉身體的方式：ball games, running, swimming, …
3．談談你對學校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。
要求：1．內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮。
2．語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on strong body. Doing sports 
every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. If we don't take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick
easily. Just as the slogan says, "Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away!"
There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and ball games. 
Now we students have to do too much homework after school. I hope teachers will leave us less 
homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more 
sports activities for us.

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文，介紹青少年鍛煉身體的好處和鍛煉身體的方式。結(jié)合所給材料，。在寫作時，本文的主語可以用第二人稱，時態(tài)一般應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。句子結(jié)構主要為動賓結(jié)構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：If we don't......，There are……及I hope……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用短語，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系， 應該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭說明青少年體育鍛煉的好處，然后，分別敘述體育鍛煉的方式。最后，希望學校多組織體育活動。此處用了keep illness away ，Just as，take part in，等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。