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【題目】我們都知道美國(guó)登山運(yùn)動(dòng)員Aron Ralston，他的故事令人感動(dòng)，激勵(lì)人心。在我們身邊，一定也有那么一些人和事，他們或許平凡，或許渺小，但卻總能鼓舞我們，摧人奮進(jìn)。
以"The Person Encouraging Me"為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。

基本情況	年齡、職業(yè)、外貌……
品質(zhì)特征	勇敢、善良、勤奮……（任選其一）
具體事例	……
對(duì)你的影響	……

要求：1)任選一項(xiàng)品質(zhì)特征，并用具體事例加以闡述。
2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名。

Answer 1

【答案】The Person Encouraging Me

My English teacher is a middle-aged man who is about 1.7 meters tall. He is a bit fat with black hair and big eyes. His appearance would leave you an impression that he is very strict. In fact, he is a kind and easy-going man.

I can still remember one thing happened when I was in Junior 2. I forgot to do my homework. I thought he would be angry and punish me. However, he just kindly told me what I should do in the future. I was so moved that I decided to finish my homework on time from then on.

My English teacher is my hero. I am studying English very hard now, because I want to be an English teacher like him in the future.

【解析】這是一篇命題作文，根據(jù)要求以 The Person Encouraging Me 為題，寫(xiě)一篇文章介紹身邊最能鼓舞自己的人，首先要介紹所寫(xiě)的人的基本情況，并在“勇敢、善良、勤奮”等品質(zhì)中選取一項(xiàng)，用具體事例加以闡述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，時(shí)態(tài)的選擇上應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)時(shí)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)闡述。人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意描述的全面性，不能漏掉寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。