Question

【題目】上周五，你們的學(xué)校為無(wú)家可歸的兒童舉行了一場(chǎng)慈善義賣活動(dòng)。你的老師請(qǐng)你為大家寫一份英語(yǔ)的演講稿作 總結(jié)并表達(dá)你自己的看法，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)。

注意：

1、參考詞匯：慈善義賣( Charity fair)，無(wú)家可歸的( homeless)；

2、字?jǐn)?shù) 80 詞左右,開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

3、不得在文中透露自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱，否則不予評(píng)分。

Dear teachers and classmates，

It's my honor to be here to share my thoughts with you today.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all! Thank you for your attention!

Answer 1

【答案】Dear teachers and classmates,

It's my honor to be here to share my thoughts with you today. Last Friday, we held a Charity Fair on the school playground to collect money for the homeless children.

All the teachers and students took part in the fair because we really would like to help the children in need. During the Charity Fair, we sold a lot of different things. Some of us sold lots of food and drinks. Some sold their old books, such as storybooks, magazines and so on. Some even sold their favourite toys. We were so excited that we totally collected about 3000 yuan in the end.

All of us enjoyed ourselves very much. It was such a wonderful day I would never forget! That's all! Thank you for your attention！

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校為無(wú)家可歸的兒童舉行的義賣活動(dòng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)的演講稿，總結(jié)這次活動(dòng)并發(fā)表自己的看法。題目中利用圖表的形式，展示了這次活動(dòng)的相關(guān)信息，這也是寫作的一個(gè)提綱，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這里的內(nèi)容，組織語(yǔ)言，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)，串聯(lián)成完整的短文。寫作前應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察這一圖表，弄清楚里面的內(nèi)容，確定文章的要點(diǎn)和主體以及短文中應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯漢語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃驮~匯表達(dá)�？梢允褂幂^容易掌握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。穿插使用較長(zhǎng)的句式，如并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫。