Question

寫(xiě)出中國(guó)一年四季的天氣變化情況。要求在80 個(gè)詞左右。

Answer 1

There are four seasons in a year in China. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter.
The weather is getting warmer and warmer in spring. The leaves and grass turn green. Summer comes after spring. It is hot. It is the best time to swim. In most part of China, it is rainy in summer. After summer is autumn. It is getting cool. The leaves turn yellow and begin to fall down. In winter the weather is very cold. It often snows in many parts of China, especially in the northern part. We can go skating and make snowmen. It’s very interesting and exciting.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。由于是介紹一年四季的變化，故時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，特別注意單數(shù)第三人稱后面的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞變化。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。