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15．當(dāng)今社會(huì)，與人交往越來(lái)越成為一種不可或缺的能力，作為中學(xué)生，學(xué)會(huì)如何與人相處
尤為重要．假如上周你們班對(duì)"如何與人相處"展開(kāi)了討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的討論結(jié)果，以
"How to get on well with others？"為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．

討論結(jié)果	（1）尊重（respect）他人 （2）學(xué)會(huì)溝通 （3）樂(lè)于助人 …
我的建議	…

注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右；
（2）可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
（3）文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校．
How to get on well with others？
As we all know，students should learn how to get on well with others．But in what ways？First of all，we should respect others．Everyone has their own way to do things，so we should understand each other．Besides，it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．What's more，we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble．In my opinion，we should treat others in an honest way．Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇以圖表作提綱的作文，要求老師要求學(xué)生就"與人相處"的話題展開(kāi)小組討論．根據(jù)表格中你所在小組的討論的結(jié)果，以"how to get well with others"為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，因此人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱we來(lái)寫(xiě)，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
寫(xiě)作思路：本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)主要包括：
一：討論結(jié)果
（1）尊重（respect）他人
（2）學(xué)會(huì)溝通
（3）樂(lè)于助人…
二：我的建議，
重點(diǎn)句型及短語(yǔ)：
 first of all 首先
communicate with sb 與某人交流
what's more 再者
be kind to sb 對(duì)某人友好
in one's opinion 依某人看來(lái)
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，②it is important for us to ③communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．
①besides 另外
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
③communicate with sb 與某人交流
2．①What's more，we should②be kind to others and③offer necessary help to those④who are in trouble．
①what's more 再者
②be kind to sb 對(duì)某人友好
③offer sth to sb 提供某物給某人
④定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞those，關(guān)系詞who做主語(yǔ)．
3．Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy．
only短語(yǔ)放句首，引起主謂倒裝．

解答 How to get on well with others？
As we all know，students should learn how to get on well with others．But in what ways？First of all，we should respect others．Everyone has their own way to do things，so we should understand each other．（尊重他人）Besides，it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．（學(xué)會(huì)溝通）【高分句型】What's more，we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble．（樂(lè)于助人）【高分句型】
In my opinion，we should treat others in an honest way．Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy．【高分句型】（我的建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇以圖表的形式提供提綱的作文，給的線索較為簡(jiǎn)單，需要我們自己發(fā)揮想象，寫(xiě)出合情合理的句子，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)還要注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，可以用到first of all，besides，what's more 等來(lái)連接讓文章更有條理．