Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給你的媽媽發(fā)信，介紹你的好朋友Tom一天的生活和做每件事的感受或看法。

In the morning	Time	Activities
	6: 30	get up, run
	7:30	Go to school,have classes
In the afternoon	4:30	Join the basketball club
	5:00	Go home, do homework
In the evening	7:00	Have dinner, play the violin
	10:00	Go to bed

Answer 1

Tom’s Day
My friend is Tom.He gets up at 6: 30.And then he always runs.After that he has a shower and has a quick breakfast.At 7:30 he goes to school by bike.At 8;00,he has classes at school. Because he joins the basketball club,he often plays basketball at 4:30 in the afternoon with his friends .When he gets home at 5:00,he starts to do his homework.At 7:00 in the evening he has dinner.After dinner,he always plays the violin.At 10:00 he goes to bed.

試題分析：本文是以表格的形式，把要寫的內(nèi)容一一列出，需要學(xué)生能夠讀懂表格，注意這里向媽媽介紹朋友Tom 的情況，所以一定要注意主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該用第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)該用單數(shù)，注意主謂一致。為了使短文讀起來(lái)流暢，要使用一些過(guò)渡的短語(yǔ)或句子。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文運(yùn)用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：He gets up at 6: 30.And then he always runs. At 7:30 he goes to school by bike. When he gets home at 5:00,he starts to do his homework.等，文中也用了一些連詞如：because，when等。使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加復(fù)雜。