Question

對(duì)于學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，自我保護(hù)非常重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下情況寫(xiě)出我們?cè)撛鯓颖Ｗo(hù)自己。
1．當(dāng)我們獨(dú)自一人在家時(shí)，……
2．當(dāng)我們騎車(chē)在路上時(shí)，……
3．當(dāng)我們看到小偷時(shí)，……
4．……
注意：1．詞數(shù)：90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．短文必須用所給的提示，并至少添加另一種情況及自我保護(hù)措施；
3．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。
It's very important for us students to keep ourselves safe.
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Answer 1

One possible version：
It's very important for us students to keep ourselves safe. When we are at home alone, we should always keep our doors closed. Don’t open the doors, when someone is knocking at the doors and you don’t know the person. When we are riding a bike on the road, we should always follow the traffic rules. When we see someone stealing , we should keep an eye on him and learn to fight with him in a clever way.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)生怎樣自我保護(hù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When we are ......,及 we should......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意最后寫(xiě)出學(xué)生要用聰明的辦法與小偷作斗爭(zhēng)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了學(xué)生自我保護(hù)的重要性，接下來(lái)介紹在家和在路上如何自我保護(hù)，最后指出要用聰明的方法與小偷作斗爭(zhēng)。此處用了keep our doors closed. knocking at，riding a bike，keep an eye on， in a clever way. 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。