Question

三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，靜坐在考場(chǎng)中的你，一定會(huì)思緒萬(wàn)千。三年來(lái)，你在學(xué)習(xí)、生活等方面取得了優(yōu)異的成績(jī)，這些成績(jī)的背后有老師的辛勤教誨、家長(zhǎng)的次次鼓勵(lì)，還有......現(xiàn)在想來(lái)他們讓你感謝。請(qǐng)以“Thank you, my…”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
要求如下：1. 短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括人物的外貌、性格、愛(ài)好和使你難忘之處等；
短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名. 
3.詞數(shù)80左右。
Thank you, my        
                                                              
                 
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

Thank you,My English teacher.
I should say “thank you” to my English teacher. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding, My English has greatly improved with his help.I think he is the best in my mind.
I will remmeber him forever.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于中學(xué)生活的文章。注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。講述過(guò)去的事情用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；講述現(xiàn)在的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；展望未來(lái)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。詞數(shù)為80個(gè)左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文中下列句子用得很好。He’s kind but is strict with us. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding,等等。