Question

 九年級的學(xué)生面臨中考，你的理想學(xué)校是哪里，為什么要選擇這個學(xué)校，說出你的理由。你應(yīng)該怎樣利用這段時間來復(fù)習(xí)各門功課，調(diào)整好狀態(tài)，充分應(yīng)戰(zhàn)。（提示：你選擇的學(xué)校的優(yōu)勢。你在學(xué)習(xí)上的時間安排，針對自己不足的科目采取的措施等等）。字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80個字。
                                                                            
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

This is the last year of my junior high school and I am facing a big exam. After graduating from my school, I want to join the NO.1 Middle School to study, which is the best high school in my city. I hear that there are many excellent teachers in that school and the teaching grade is very good there. I think I can study well there. What’s more, NO.1 Middle School is not far from my home. During the last few months, I will make a good plan to study for the final exam, especially English. Although I have a little difficulty in learning English, I will work harder to improve it. And I will practice more to improve my listening ability. I hope I can realize my dream.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以一個初三學(xué)生的身份對自己即將畢業(yè)，面臨中考這一問題來寫一篇作文。該題目有點半開放性，材料中給的范圍很寬泛。但是我們還是得要注意它給出的提示，因為它給我們規(guī)定了書寫內(nèi)容。包括，畢業(yè)后選擇哪所學(xué)校，這所學(xué)校的優(yōu)勢在哪里；你學(xué)習(xí)上的時間如何安排；針對弱勢科目采取什么措施等。這些都屬于開放性的，同學(xué)們要展開想象力，將以上內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。同時還要注意行文的連貫，表達(dá)的流暢。
【亮點說明】這篇范文書寫內(nèi)容完整，層次分明，是一篇不錯的學(xué)生作文。首先作者對自己目前面臨的情勢做了分析，即將畢業(yè)，而且還要參加中考。然后作者寫了自己想去的學(xué)校，并寫出了這所學(xué)校的兩個優(yōu)勢。接下來作者寫了自己最后這段時間的安排，以及針對自己不足的科目，如英語，將會采取什么措施來提高。最后作者表達(dá)了自己的愿望。寫作時注意了使用句型或短語，以使文章表達(dá)流暢，有節(jié)奏，如After graduating from my school, I want to join、I hear that there are many excellent teachers in that school and the teaching grade is very good there、Although I have a little difficulty in learning English, I will work harder to improve it等。